The central metaphor of the "lady" who defies expectations is intriguing
The theme about fair-weather friends ("when you're up, they hang like a testicle") captures real frustration with opportunistic people
Some clever wordplay and internal rhymes (ramble/shamble/gamble)
I really don’t know what to say here other than I was approached and asked if I do any rap lyrics or songwriting, so I came up with this in about 5 minutes and here it is. Everybody loved it! WILLIAM MACRIS
The central metaphor of the "lady" who defies expectations is intriguing
The theme about fair-weather friends ("when you're up, they hang like a testicle") captures real frustration with opportunistic people
Some clever wordplay and internal rhymes (ramble/shamble/gamble)
I really don’t know what to say here other than I was approached and asked if I do any rap lyrics or songwriting, so I came up with this in about 5 minutes and here it is. Everybody loved it! WILLIAM MACRIS